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Paragon
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0 posted 2003-06-07 10:05 PM



The reverb of your words resurrecting emotions
I killed the first time you spoke them

The sound of your steps opening doors in my heart
I locked when last I heard your steps trail off

The warmth of your body rekindling the heart
I froze when that warmth faded away

The thought of your return awakens the giant within
I coerced to sleep when you walked away from us

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LegalSecret69
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1 posted 2003-06-07 11:40 PM


This was really good....I'm not sure I understand ALL of it, but it was nice to read....  Good write. Keep it up!  "Secret"
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2 posted 2003-06-07 11:58 PM


"The reverb of your words resurrecting emotions
I killed the first time you spoke them"

That's a good line, and it's the first line.. So I read the whole thing, and that was all just as good as what I read to begin with. Lovely.

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