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fallen_star1715
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since 2003-06-25
Posts 18


0 posted 2003-07-11 05:11 AM



Why do we try from things that you think....
Im never going to get?,
Why do we cry over people.....
Who wont cry over us?
Why do we watch,see your do things....
Just for peoples accpetance...
Why do we let people....
tell us what 2 do...
Why do we let people tell us what to say?
Why do we hide...
from things that arn't really there...
Why do we love people....
that are never going to care

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Deep_Inside
Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2003-07-11 07:44 PM


i was a little confused by this i had to read it a couple of times but i think i got it maybe this person does care for you but just doesn't know it yet keep posting
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-07-12 08:07 PM


good point. why do we cry over people that won't cry for us..very thought provoking. I liked this.
~Lex

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