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LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

0 posted 2003-06-04 04:45 PM

Through the water
I can see,
a blue eyed girl
who looks like me.
I blink my eyes
and then look twice
This girl's reflection
was in this water, made of ice
As a tear falls
it shaters so
and covers the water
turning it to snow.
How can that tear
be so cold?
And why is my reflection,
oh so bold?
Who is this girl,
it can't be me.
For I am sad,
and she's full of glee...
Who is this girl?
it can't be me.

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

1 posted 2003-06-05 08:44 AM

l know exactly how u feel.... sometimes the world just seemes too real, and everything too loud.
if you need to talk, email me at surizza@hotmail.com... it's no trouble, and you've got a talent you should continue exploring.
laurie.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-06-05 11:31 AM

I agree with Laurie...

Great write! I liked the tear idea...and the imagery. I could see everything you were saying. ~Jess

"If a thing is worth doing at all, it is worth doing badly." -Gustav Holst

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2003-06-05 01:58 PM

Awesome... And WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Hope you enjoy it here. This is a great first post, your imagery is awesome. I'm looking forward to reading much more from you in the future!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

4 posted 2003-06-05 04:15 PM

I really enoyed getting all of the replies. Thanks for making me feel welcome here... Im not the person to share my poems... but something recently changed my mind.... "Secret"

LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

5 posted 2003-06-05 05:44 PM

CwBoyAtHeart...I just want to appologize, because somehow when you look up my poems...one of yours in in my list. I must of clicked on something by an accident, but I was going to e.mail you, but I wasn't sure where to find your e.mail address...if there is any way for me to delete it..please let me know! my deepest apologies..i feel really bad about this... I didn't want you to be mad, and think I was trying to get credit for something that wasn't mine... "Secret"

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

6 posted 2003-06-05 10:11 PM

Welcome! Nice work... I look forward to reading more!

-Lioness

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

7 posted 2003-06-05 10:31 PM

LegalSecret69-

Ahh...how we love to trick ourselves. The flow was particularily good.

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