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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
You're my world I told you the truth The other day I thought you would turn And walk away But you stayed and understood What I had to say Thank you for staying And not walking away There's no on particular That I want to be I just want you To come along with me I want to spend my life with yow You're the only only one Even if you're with someone else My love won't ever be gone I will back away if you want I will let you have your girl But I will always be there for you You will always be my world. |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
bravo bravo! clap clap wot wot and GOOD JOB! |
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xxshadowxx Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43Texas |
Hey GREAT poem. It was nice.. I liked it `CARRIE` "Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me" |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
Hey ! i noticed you are a new member ! i enjoyed your poem...i can relate to this in so may ways... nice job,keep writing. and Welcome !!!  |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
New member! WOO-HOO! LOL..More than merrier! Anyways..this was a good poem. I like it a lot. In a few ways in can relate. Good work! ~Jess  "If a thing is worth doing at all, it is worth doing badly." -Gustav Holst |
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome Please check your email for a special greeting! |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
hey i love the poem. how come the moderators dont look at my work ?????? keep writing i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me. |
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