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vballplaya18
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0 posted 2003-06-01 11:25 PM


Hi!
Did you see how excited i was?
Remember those times?
Did you even know i used to love you?
I thought that i loved you so much,
I thought i would never get over you!
I was wrong.
'Cause now i am!
You screwed me over twice,
Ignored me twice,
And now
Im done!
I want no more!
You don't make me happy when i think of you,
In fact, all you do is repulse me!

I haven't talked to you in months
And im glad!
Im tired of loving you,
Im tired of putting myself out there,
I can't take it anymore!
Im out,
No more,
Im gone,
And this time,
Its for good!

I hope i never talk or see you again!
And honestly,
I don't care!
Hope your life is good,
'Cause i kno mine will be!
Have fun by yourself,
'Cause now im gone,
I have moved on!

This time,
There's no turning back for me!
You're my past,
And that's where you'll stay!
So, all i've got for you,
Is one last goodbye,
Goodbye...forever!
'Cause im never coming back!

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1 posted 2003-06-02 12:03 PM


Yay!! I can't tell you how much I like this!!It was like you were not only saying good bye you were throughing it in his face that he screwed up and he's the sorry fool you will realize it to late cause now your gone! It's like..haha, you sorry bastard!!...ok personalizing that one a little bit!! But anyways well done good emotion and you know what..Go You!! Be strong and stand up and say screw you and feel good about it! More power to you as far as I'm concerned! K I'm done ranting now I promise!
~Live and Laugh~

Always strive for excellence never perfection.
~Bella~

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