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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2003-06-01 10:17 PM


Blame mistakenly thrown in every direction
untill she realizes she cannot not
blame herself for some of the problems caused
by choices she has made in her life and
she dabs her brush in more red paint
draws some lines on the wall illustrating all
the lies she's caused, insinuation in a paper
bag as she attempts to choke herself with
oxygen never realizing that maybe if she just
inhaled everything would be okay again.

Mistaken views from inside the barrel of the
water bin she drowns not realizing she should
just stand up and maybe the demons she creates
would all just vanish right before her vary
mishapen, miscalculated eyes as she paints the
blood red polish onto her nails, owns every
color but still refuses to change, change her life
she'd rather struggle through it than learn
how to survive.

She uses them and throws them away like the
tissues she uses to wipe her problems away and
she cannot discard people like that, no matter
what she thinks she cannot pawn people off like
that it just doesn't work that way and she will
never find happiness if the only direction she
looks is down.


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SEA
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1 posted 2003-06-05 11:26 PM


my goodness, do you have any idea, just how fantastic this is??? WOW... seriously, this is an awesome write.....

[This message has been edited by SEA (06-05-2003 11:26 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-06-07 12:34 PM


Okay, that's it. This is the second one of yours I've read today, and I'm now officially adding you to my library.

Wonderful writing...

-Lioness

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3 posted 2003-06-07 03:40 PM


Allysa....  beautifully done. I truly enjoyed it
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