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Drifting Away... |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
I miss you so very much I'm not sure what to do I think of every word you've said every move you've made the hurtful ways you treated me though smiling was all I could do never wanting to be mad at you just loving you is all I could do your stuck in my head the thought of you not with me it makes me weak inside each day the obstacle of forgetting our past becomes a larger one when time is not an issue I lay down thinkng of you wondering what to do desperatly trying to find a replacment for the gaping hole in my soul losing my train of thought it all becomes a daze my eyes becoming heavy the way I tend to be as sleep creeps over me... *Cassandra |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
First off, welcome to Passions! It's great to have you here with us sharing your work and insights  I really liked this piece, as I can relate to the feelings expressed in it so well. One thing I learned from it is: Look to yourself for completeness not to others, it is all within you. Love should never be a need, always a gift.Anyway thanks for sharing I like muchly Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
thanks for the reply ... yeah i agree with you that love should be a gift not a need but sometimes it feels needed more than anything ecspecially when previous relationships have gone bad... anyways thanks for sharing ur thoughts! *Cassandra |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
You put a lot into this, Cassandra. I think many of us have been in that position before... talk to us, and you could hear great stories of heartbreak and triumph. Fortunately, there is always a fairy tale ending. Be patient, and the one you deserve will come on his horse to swift you away... until then, learn to love yourself. You can love no one until you know yourself and love yourself inside and out. Good luck... I liked this poem, it was a wonderful read. I am really looking forward to more And again - welcome!--Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Great job! I really do like this one. Esp. the last few lines. Great work and I hope to hear more from ya! ~Jess  "If a thing is worth doing at all, it is worth doing badly." -Gustav Holst |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
One way to fill that void is to eat chocolate. Unfortunately, chocolate causes holes in your teeth, and if you're not careful, your mouth will be void of teeth.  Many of us have gone what you've gone through, and it's all very normal. The only problem is that it is difficult to get through, but *states without trying to be cheesy* what doesn't kill us will only make us stronger. Time hurts though. Die time. Die. Keep up the writing, and Welcome To PIPTALK! Yay!!!  ... *celebrates* -Leah  |
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