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lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2003-05-30 03:28 PM

Am I crazy to be feeling the way I do
I have know you for what seems like a minute
But indeed feels like a lifetime

What do I do about these butterflies inside
how i feel is hard to hide
iam wondering if you understand?
Or if you feel like I do?

Why did you have to come in my life
And then leave, just like that

Am I crazy to want to be with you
To want to be where you are

So you tell me you like me,
you dont want to leave
Then why didnt you stay
Now im without you to this day

So now its miles not minutes
So now its bye not hi

So tell me if im crazy to want to scream
So someone pinch me and tell me to wake from this dream

I cant stop how i feel
I cant pretend you didnt matter
So call me crazy for feeling

I want this to be a fairy tale
Where I see you again
But I know and you know, thats all just pretend

So should I move on to the next
Get hurt once and again

So months have gone by,life still the same
So are you thinking of me still
or do i not exist

Iam sick of the getting hurt part
that comes with each love

So I do all that i can to see you once more
but you say dont go for me
like now what we felt hides behind a closed door

Start from the beging, or start from the end?
how bout you forget how you feel and just be my friend
prentend i dont matter to you
prentend you dont care

So call me crazy if i dont want to

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

1 posted 2003-05-31 07:00 PM

Guys can be such morons... *sigh* Know how ya feel, girl.

Nice job on the poem... however, it was a bit inconsistent. You might try to format it so it's a bit easier to follow. And fix the spelling mistakes...

Keep on writing!

-Lioness

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

2 posted 2003-06-01 03:29 PM

i can relate to your poem ... its hard to try to be friends with someone when you have had a rough past already
iam in that situation right now and its so hard when you see them with other people ...wishing it was you that took there place .. but other than that it needs a little fixing in spelling but it was good !

*Cassandra

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