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Teen Poetry #6

My Utopia

sing'n fool
Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 82
Morris, Il

0 posted 2003-05-30 02:47 PM

it may take you more than one time reading this to get the rhyming sceme.I just wanted to have fun with this one.

My Utopia

A nice place to find
would be a good
frame of mind.
That's something I
really don't get
all the time.

I'm lost in my worries
and franticaly hurry.
I scamper and scurry
till I'm dizzy and blurry;
I must be loosing my mind.

I need a place in the sun,
something carefree and fun,
where I am at one
and my spirit can run;
a place worries can't find.

M.P.D

Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

*Dark Princess*
Junior Member

since 2003-04-13

Posts 22
lost in the shadows

1 posted 2003-05-30 05:28 PM

I got the rhyming okay, and thought this was a really nice piece...I like your work...Claire

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