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0 posted 2003-05-30 12:51 PM


"If You Knew"
(30/05/03)

Each tick from the old clock on the wall echos in my head.
It's such a haunting sound, it really has me bound,
To tryna vanish by building a fortress in my bed.
Acting like a clown...
My desk is filled with your memories and your photographs.
For it didn't last long, me and my moving on.
No matter what I do with my life nothing fill's that gab
Of you being gone...

I Ache Inbetween Breaths, Ache When I Breathe.
It's Been Forever Since My Last Heartbeat.
You Would Be Missing Me Too,
If You Knew, ( If You Knew),
Just How Much I'm Missing You...
(x2)

You never really miss the water 'till the well is dry.
Thought it was a saying, but now I am praying,
For the smallest of drops to find the time to pass me by.
It's really weighing...
The sweet sent of you is still hanging in the furniture.
Makes me reminisce, of days filled with bliss.
Without your hand on my shoulder I feel so insecure,
It's like a bad itch...

Chorus

I just can't live without you,
Look at all the tears I cry.
What do you want me to do,
When you are the reason why...

Chorus

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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2003-06-01 10:26 AM


Good one...very sensually appealing in its imagery. Thanks for sharing
Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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