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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa 
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Got inspired while listening to Dashboard Confessional. The miles between us keep adding up I miss you so much But I look at your picture and am amazed Your handsome face but, I am amazed because it brings no comfort I long to touch you, look at you To just know that we are thinking of eachother I never will know when I get back home I can only hope that you waited for me If you didn't I can understand Since I never said goodbye " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Interesting read!  Maybe you could continue this poem or write a second one. The last line really left me hanging.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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