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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-05-29 05:18 PM



I can’t get away from it all,
Nothing is as it seems.
My silent tears began to fall,
But in my head I hear the screams..

He holds my heart in his hand,
I hope he doesn’t let it go.
But what I don’t understand,
Is how he doesn’t even know.

Something’s wrong, I can tell,
But he keeps quiet and won’t say,
What’s been putting him through hell,
As it slowly takes him over, day by day.

I can see it in his eyes,
I can feel it when he shakes.
But most of all I see the lies,
And how his heart breaks.

But what’s in his gorgeous soul?
What’s he made of?
What makes him whole?
How does he find love?

As for myself, I do not know,
I’ve been hurt more than my share.
I once knew love.. a long time ago..
But to talk of that.. well..lets not go there..


If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (05-29-2003 05:21 PM).]

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SCREAMIN
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 51
US, Tx
1 posted 2003-05-29 05:20 PM


That was REALLY - and I mean REALLY - good!
Wow!! I am at a loss of intellegent words.

But soft, what light through yonder window break. It is the east, and Juliet is the sun...

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2003-05-29 05:23 PM


LoL, Thank you, I'm glad you liked this.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
3 posted 2003-05-29 08:42 PM


I already read this...and I could read it a hundred times over again. Really great job with this one!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
4 posted 2003-05-30 11:28 PM


Oh yes, I like this. Esp how ya ended it. Good job! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

blueyedlioness
Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
5 posted 2003-05-31 07:16 PM


Unnnhh...

Woah.

I feel inadequate.

*sits in silence*

-Lioness

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