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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
May Demo this and some other of the "Songs" i've posted in this site... "Shadow Girl" (28/05/03) Shadow girl tryna seem lose Searching for the right hand to Make the marks of black and blue It's the only thing She know how to do... Shadow girl gets off on pain She's been told she's not quit sain But that's how she plays the game Cause she only feel When she feels the rain... Growing up Without love It's hard to change a habbit It's hard to say I've had it When daddy's mouth are walking When daddy's fists are talking Shadow girl she feels alright Standing under the street light Each and every single night Because inside her Our wrong is a right Shadow girl she'll never find The right, the strong or the kind Cause she looks for the wrong signs But it's not her fault Though she can't rewind Growing up Without love It's hard to change a habbit It's hard to say I've had it When daddy's mouth are walking When daddy's fists are talking She'll continue to Be all alone Not knowing the truth Of a fair home Poor, poor Shadow girl It's such a cruel world Growing up Without love It's hard to change a habbit It's hard to say I've had it When daddy's mouth are walking When daddy's fists are talking [This message has been edited by Hallucination (05-27-2003 10:50 PM).] |
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*Dark Princess* Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 22lost in the shadows |
I really like this,...it would do well as a song...I can feel the emotion all through it...Keep it up...Jess |
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