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Teen Poetry #6

never forget

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

0 posted 2003-05-21 07:02 PM

When I see you my life lightens up
my heart beats so fast it could erupt.

When we kiss your lips oh so sweet
I swear my heart missed a beat.

The gentleness of your touch your safe embrace
made me feel I belonged some where some place.

and when I'm sad or down
you were always there always around.

Then one day you were gone
but the memory of you will always be strong

You will never be forgoten every word you would say
I will remember you in each and every way

As days go by with each sheded tear
I know that I'am getting near

I cant wait to see you to be with you again
so I can have you as my lover as a friend

But right now until that day
I will always tell you I love you each time I pray

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

1 posted 2003-05-21 07:12 PM

this is good

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-05-21 10:45 PM

This is good!

My only suggestion would be maybe add punctuation to it...just a thought.
Jenni

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2003-05-22 08:35 AM

Awww....I like this one, it's sooo sweet!

Liz xx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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