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teenpoet
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0 posted 2003-05-21 10:27 AM


To the incredibly admirablt seniors of 2003 who will someday rule the world
~
~
Some things last forever
And some things end too quickly
High school may be over for you
And not yet over for me
but I hope to still see you
And laugh with you daily
Right now you're celebrating
And I know you'll soon be crying
But that doesn't really matter
Because it's been so great
Hanging out and laughing
And just because it's over
Doesn't mean it has to end
The world may seperate us
But vivid in our minds will be
All those great memories
High school ends so quickly
But I'm hoping that just maybe
Our friendship is one of those
Things that last forever
It may not work exactly as you want
You'll pull through it all
And....
I hope you have the time of your life
~
~
I'd just like to say that you are all great and no matter what you decide to do with your life, whether you succeed or fail, you will always be unbeatable, and don't forget that.


I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

[This message has been edited by teenpoet (05-21-2003 10:28 AM).]

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skyshine
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1 posted 2003-05-21 10:27 PM


What a nice tribute...I'm sure the seniors will appreciate it!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

snoduck
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2 posted 2003-05-22 01:08 AM


thats really cool. I like it. I'm sure its going to be much appreciated! (power to class of 2005!!!)

-Erica-

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3 posted 2003-05-22 07:42 AM


Lovely tribute Thumbs up this end!
Liz xx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

teenpoet
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4 posted 2003-05-22 10:23 AM


Are you all going to miss the seniors like I am?  I almost wanted to cry AND my best friend is a senior.  

sigh....

They're gone....

Next year will be worse because then almost all my friends will be gone.....

And class of 2005 ROCKS!!!!


I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

[This message has been edited by teenpoet (05-22-2003 10:24 AM).]

BrokenAngel
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5 posted 2003-05-22 07:29 PM


A tribute that is all to true, I know I will be crying more than likely as I walk the line.  I'm sure the Seniors at your school will really apreciate this work.  I know I do and I'm sure the rest of my class would as well.

Class of 2003 for Henry County Patriots
            Free in '03
        (out on good behavior)

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

Albino_Jenn
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6 posted 2003-05-22 11:00 PM


This is a good poem, thanks for the tribute, I know I'll be crying as I leave the doors to the school one last final time!! Its great to know you can express your hope for those around you!! Thanks for the support!!
Jenn
BBSS '03
K-town, Ontario

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

wvplayernotreally
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7 posted 2003-05-23 10:21 PM


Ya! Go seniors! Even thought i am not one. Good poem what all of us are feeling about your friends graduating

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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8 posted 2003-05-24 01:03 PM


power to '07! ( only 4 more years!!!!)

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

SilentTears
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9 posted 2003-05-24 05:07 PM


"And just because it's over
Doesn't mean it has to end"

This was such a sad, but good poem. I'm not quite done with high school yet...but I have a lot of friends who are. I think you did a really good job with this particular topic. Nice work.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Kandi
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10 posted 2003-05-27 05:27 PM


I really loved this. If you don't mind I'd like to print it and take it to college with me, maybe share it with some of my fellow seniors. Thank you for the wonderful tribute.
Kay

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

teenpoet
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11 posted 2003-05-28 03:53 PM


Hey no prob, if you want a copy get one.  That's kind of the point.  For all seniors who are graduating to get one that can, even if I don't know them.  Glad you all like it.

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

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