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xxshadowxx
Junior Member
since 2003-05-17
Posts 43
Texas

0 posted 2003-05-19 06:34 PM


When people look at me
they don't want to see the real me
they judge my clothes and my hair
as they walk around with their nose in the air

They all think and act alike
and think that every thing they do is right
and if we dont act like them
we get talked about and laughed at by them

This is what the world is like
ans it's not fair or right
so that is why I'am who I'am
no one can change that or bring me down

I'm not going to be sad or frown
because i know that deep down inside
they all have insecurities to hide

© Copyright 2003 Carrie - All Rights Reserved
blackandwhitehorizon
Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind
1 posted 2003-05-19 09:21 PM


really nice i know how you feel and i like the message you get across. good job.

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2003-05-19 10:06 PM


Agreed.  Amen to that.  Never let the world dictate who you become, rather grow strong and help shape the world into a better place.  Great writing!

                                                                                                            'Rich

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

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