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BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-05-19 04:31 PM

Captivate me
With eyes so blue
Let me swim in their waters
Feel the waves flow over me.

Tranquilize me
With tender lips
In a kiss so powerful
It takes my breath away.

Reinvent me
With the love you so often give
Changing the way I view life
To see only the beauty of the world.

Mutilate me
With kind and flattering words
Make me melt within your arms
Make me yearn to be held by you.

Modify me
Into something worth loving.

Change me
Into something I want to be. *

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

[This message has been edited by BabieDoll (05-19-2003 04:37 PM).]

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

1 posted 2003-05-19 04:33 PM

Jenn...I absolutely LOVE this poem. It flows sooo beautifully! Really nice job. I think it's one of my favorites of yours! Awesome write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2003-05-19 10:27 PM

Heeeeey! A love poem, my favorite kind

! THis was great, truely great! I know how you feel, and can relate very well. WEll, keep on writing, and hopefully I'll be around to read it!

Forever I will stand
always here with you.
Now stay and hold my hand
and together we'll go somewhere new.
~Rich~

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2003-05-20 12:25 PM

Wow... This was truly amazing. One of the best poems I've read in a while. Very good, I really really liked it. I wish I could find a love like that, but I suppose we all do. Thanks for posting!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

4 posted 2003-05-20 10:36 PM

Good Poem keep it up! ~Tori louise~

Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try.

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