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xxshadowxx
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 43
Texas

0 posted 2003-05-18 12:16 PM


People are to blind to see
the real person inside
they judge you like a book cover
not seeing the inside
not giving you a chance
not seeing the real you
not giving you a chance to show your colors true
they only see your appearance
to blind to see your heart
dont let them get you depressed
put your mind at rest
it's not your fault if they can't see
how great a person you can be.

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blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind
1 posted 2003-05-18 12:30 PM


that is just so so true. nice poem.

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

xxshadowxx
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 43
Texas
2 posted 2003-05-18 12:47 PM


hey
ty.. i really didnt like that one but other people said i should post it so i did.
  
                            


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Beneath the northern stars
3 posted 2003-05-18 04:05 PM


Very true words! Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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