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0 posted 2003-05-16 12:33 PM


hey all lets see how awesome we can make a love poem i'll start and you continue but don't forget to copy the whole thing so others can add on.


she peers out the window
but he is not there
oh how she longs for his arms around her


hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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1 posted 2003-05-17 02:17 AM


she peers out the window
but he is not there
oh how she longs for his arms around her
to feel his love
shes waited for his oh so long
but yet he is not there
c'mon people you can do this i challenege ya!!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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2 posted 2003-05-17 04:37 AM


she peers out the window
but he is not there
oh how she longs for his arms around her
to feel his love
shes waited for his oh so long
but yet he is not there

he gazes at the moon
in search of her love
the softness of her touch
and the love in her eyes

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3 posted 2003-05-17 06:40 AM


she peers out the window
but he is not there
oh how she longs for his arms around her
to feel his love
shes waited for his oh so long
but yet he is not there

he gazes at the moon
in search of her love
the softness of her touch
and the love in her eyes

Almost as if-
he's waited forever.
In search of his soulmate,
will his time ever come-
for love?

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

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4 posted 2003-05-17 03:39 PM


she peers out the window
but he is not there
oh how she longs for his arms around her
to feel his love
shes waited for his oh so long
but yet he is not there

he gazes at the moon
in search of her love
the softness of her touch
and the love in her eyes

Almost as if-
he's waited forever.
In search of his soulmate,
will his time ever come-
for love?

----------

A gentle breeze blows
As the moonlight hides behind a cloud
Almost as if the light itself is as elusive
As the love he is searching for...

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

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5 posted 2003-06-03 04:57 PM


she peers out the window
but he is not there
oh how she longs for his arms around her
to feel his love
shes waited for his oh so long
but yet he is not there

he gazes at the moon
in search of her love
the softness of her touch
and the love in her eyes

Almost as if-
he's waited forever.
In search of his soulmate,
will his time ever come-
for love?

----------

A gentle breeze blows
As the moonlight hides behind a cloud
Almost as if the light itself is as elusive
As the love he is searching for...

is entrapped in bitter sweet emotion
she loves him so much but can say so little
bound to a haughty fathers discretion
she cries out longing for his return

punkrockerrobin
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6 posted 2003-06-08 04:36 AM


holy crap it's jimmy!!!! i thought you disappeared! i miss you dear!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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