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0 posted 05-15-2003 09:06 PM       View Profile for SixtiesChick03   Email SixtiesChick03   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SixtiesChick03

Why do you like seeing
my heart continously breaking?
How can you live with yourself
knowing you caused great pain
to the one person that loved you so.
I know you can see this pain
all you have to do is look in my eyes.
How could you be so cold;
if i knew you could be that way
i wouldnt know this heartache
that can will never go away.
All i want is for this pain to end,
to never feel this way agian.
But as for now,
I know that we can never be again.
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since 11-15-2002
Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 05-16-2003 07:20 PM       View Profile for snoduck   Email snoduck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snoduck

WOW, you don't even know how much I know how bad you feel. My ex called me drunk to tell me he loved me at 1 in the morning. and I haven't talked to him since then. That was 6 months ago. Hun, I hope things get better for you...


since 07-12-2001
Posts 142

2 posted 05-20-2003 08:33 PM       View Profile for lilibeelee   Email lilibeelee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilibeelee

I think that this is very well written good job.
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since 05-17-2003
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3 posted 05-20-2003 08:54 PM       View Profile for xxshadowxx   Email xxshadowxx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for xxshadowxx

Beautiful.. i love it

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

since 04-24-2003
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4 posted 05-25-2003 08:46 PM       View Profile for blueyedlioness   Email blueyedlioness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueyedlioness

Can't guys be just awful sometimes? I've so had the whole drunk, high, hungover, getting arrested, phone calls at non-existent hours of the morning thing too many times... and I know guys, you're not all like that. But sometimes it seems like it.

Girl, I am so sorry you're going through that. I know how bad it hurts. Awesome job on the poem... keep writing... it always helps just to get your feelings into something manageable. Hope things get better for you.

since 02-09-2003
Posts 432
In The Clouds

5 posted 05-25-2003 09:38 PM       View Profile for BrokenDreams   Email BrokenDreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrokenDreams

MEN. Can't live with em, can't live without em. I know they're not all scum sucking weasels, but some of us always seem to find the ones that are. But anyway, enough of my ranting. Good poem.

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

since 02-15-2003
Posts 373
Lost and Broken

6 posted 05-26-2003 12:23 PM       View Profile for SilentTears   Email SilentTears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentTears

I totally agree with BrokenDreams. Men can be so ignorant. I'm actually having problems with my boyfriend right I can really relate to this. Thanks for the read!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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7 posted 01-20-2004 10:19 PM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle

Guys can be soo... completely awful! My ex, used to be like that, well, he probably still is! I havent talked to him in, i dont know how long. Since i moved i guess. We went out three times, and each time he broke my heart, then wanted me back. Finally i saw that he was never going to change, an told him to.. well, i cant say, but you get the idea! ~lol~ It took a long time to get over him, because i truly loved him, and thats why i gave him so many chances, in hopes hed change. Well enough about that! I really loved your poem, it was beautifully written, and i loved it, like i love many of your other poems!

*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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