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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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It rolls out deep blue sky blue sea blue the line has disappeared, remains the white mane's trail snailing and twisting I feel myself drowning. I see only two colours, and above a disc of white light housing me not finding me I sink of despair rolled around me, close fitting dress sensual whisper of the sea's own flesh the worrying thoughts have left only leaves a bitter peace I grasp the crispy sand's shape and wait, till I find rest. "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
An excellent poem. It nearly hit home for me. ^~^If we cannot live so as to be happy, let us least live so as to deserve it.~*~ |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Flying cloud, thank you for your sweet words... I love your pseudonym btw  "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Flying cloud, thank you for your sweet words... I love your pseudonym btw "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Flying cloud, thank you for your sweet words... I love your pseudonym btw "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Flying cloud, thank you for your sweet words... I love your pseudonym btw |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
whoops sorry...my computer is behaving strangely...i didn't mean to post it so often!!!  |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Oooh... very whispery and flowing. Lovely. |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
aww...thank you blueyedlioness |
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