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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-05-14 07:57 PM

Something I wrote today in class... I have really been wanting to write something that I could work out for guitar to use as a praise song in church sometime, and I think I just might be able to pull this one off. Let me know what you think.

HALLELUJAH

There’s not a word I could say
That you haven’t heard before
But I know there’s none more worthy
So I sing to you once more

Chorus:
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
You are worthy to be praised
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
There’s not a day I’m not amazed
Hallelujah

Everything that You have made
Water, earth, wind and sky
You have created all we see
And I lift your name on high

Chorus

Hallelujah, Hallelujah
You are the king of kings
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
There will come a day
When every soul sings
Hallelujah

Hallelujah, Hallelujah…
(Fade to end)

      - Cody -

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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2003-05-14 09:31 PM

ok cody doing as you told me to do i am replying to this poem. it's great i loved it.
robin

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cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-05-15 11:47 AM

Oooh... yes. I think you could definitely use that in church. You might even add another verse or two, being that right now, depending on how many times you repeat it/how fast you play it, it's going to be hard to make it very long. Good job.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-05-16 02:29 PM

Cody~
I really like this and I think it has the makings
of a beautiful praise song.
Your talent is really growing lately, and
I am very much enjoying reading you.
Very nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

4 posted 2003-05-16 02:52 PM

Cody-

The tone of this actually reminds me of a song by Sanctus Real called "I Love you". A very simple praise song, but with so much more to offer in humbleness. I think you did an excellent job on this one. I would've liked to see an extra verse, though, but that's only a suggestion.