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FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head

0 posted 2003-05-12 06:58 PM


DewGrass-I


A single golden ray of light,
On prismatic morning dew,
And through the crystal bright,
Wonderous silence, for few.

Nature holds her breath,
A moment of glory, in the dew,
And Life holds back Death,
A simple stunning thing to view.

The World has yet to Wake,
And black Night doth now sleep,
Fortunate those, who take,
This simple beauty, fathoms deep.




+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)


[This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (05-12-2003 11:37 PM).]

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snoduck
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since 2002-11-15
Posts 99
Selah, WA
1 posted 2003-05-12 11:10 PM


Very nice, I'm not a huge fan of rhyming poetry, but this was good... really good.  made me feel like I was reading shakespeare or something similiar.  but anyways a very nice poem, i liked it a lot. thanks for sharing!!!  P.S. i like the picture also

-Erica-

blueyedlioness
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
2 posted 2003-05-13 05:57 PM


Ooooh... yes...

Shakespeare is my hero.

And that was awesome.

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