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Teen Poetry #6

A Light

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

0 posted 2003-05-10 09:01 PM

Sometimes, its so dark,
As you wander through the night,
You can't see what's there,
So you bring up a lit candle,
To shed some light.

Whether in a blazing 60 watt,
Or in a tiny spark,
There's always hope, that the light,
Will show what's in the dark.

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Sorry for the brevity of this poem, but I was starting to run out of ideas for other poems I am thinking about.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2003-05-10 09:10 PM

this poems's simplicity well defines it's meaning...or mabye the other way around...either way, I'm diggin' it. good job.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-05-11 06:47 PM

I like this simple poem...quite good If I do say so myself!!!!
Jenn

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

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