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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-05-08 08:00 PM



Watch me disappear…

I've never felt like this
Remembering all I should've said
But kept it locked up instead
Now you pretend I don't exist.

Everything no longer clear…

So I speak to no one
About all that’s bothering me
Not proud of the things I’ve done
Hiding the things I don’t want you to see.

Nothing left to say now…

Pictures don’t lie
I saw the truth in a flash
Wishing I could say goodbye
but instead watch them turn to ash

Wanting to fix things…but how?

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
FlyingCloud
Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
1 posted 2003-05-08 08:49 PM


This poem touched me. It spoke to me in a way that other poems didn't. Well done.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

Tabitha LeAnn
Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 50
Kansas, USA
2 posted 2003-05-08 09:22 PM


WOW!! SO MOVING. I LOVED THIS POEM IT WAS HARD TO UNDERSTAND BUT I THINK THAT WAS WHAT MADE IT SO GOOD THAT YOU HAD TO THINK ABOUT WHAT IT WAS SAYING.  I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK. EXCELLENT POEM
BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
3 posted 2003-05-09 06:42 AM


I really liked this Staci...great job hun.

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
4 posted 2003-05-09 11:14 PM


Great job, Stac. I really like this one. And considering I know EXACTLY what you're talking about...I felt it even more. Really good one. Love's.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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