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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419


0 posted 2003-05-08 07:18 PM


"Every Fan"
(09/05/03)
© 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

I got nothing to lose and everything to win,
So listen carefully here is where I begin,
You may think I'm foolish sayin' my life's music.
This voice doesn't lay down roll over and play dead,
Imma give you something that you'll never forget,
And just like Craig David Imma earn your credit.
I promise the money's worth it,
'Cause I know the buyer's perfect...

Every fan, man or woman, young and old.
The reasons that music is even sold.
Am I going up? am I going down?
Is this the right or is this the wrong sound?
The choise yours to make, so make it wis-no
Just make it, sit back and enjoy the show...
Every Fan.

Imma do my best to make each one sing along,
And make my messages so clear and also strong,
I will let all you peeps decide if I'll repeat.
Imma make my mistakes but learn to live with it,
And If I **** up don't ever do what I did,
Know I'm not your teacher, know that I can't teach ya.
But go on look at what you have,
Do not make a good thing go bad...

Chorus

Celebrity? Tell every-body
I don't need a one inch Cell like Britney
I wanna rise and fall...
I'll rise and fall! Nothing and all, don't care
This is what I do, this is how I share
Everything that I've got...With

Chorus

© Copyright 2003 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
blueyedlioness
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
1 posted 2003-05-09 09:24 AM


NICE... oooooooh, I LOVE good lyrics.

Now just write the music! And if you do make it into a real song... I wanna hear it. :p

Tabitha LeAnn
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 50
Kansas, USA
2 posted 2003-05-09 02:47 PM


WOW THIS WAS GREAT!! CAN I BE YOUR GROUPIE . I LOVED THIS ANYWAYS IT WAS SO TRU ANYONE WHO PERFORMS SOMETHING OF THERE OWN CAN RELATE EXCELENT!!!!
BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
3 posted 2003-05-10 12:25 PM


So far I have loved everything I've seen from you and this is no different. I hope that someday you accompish your dreams.
Jenni

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