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Teen Poetry #6

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teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-05-08 11:17 AM

I never have the time to think
To finish a thought a poem or what
I'd like someday to finish
But I never really do
My thoughts fade off before I know
What exactly I'm thinking
I'd like to add to everything
What exactly that everything is
I'm not sure
I just know that I've never finished
Anything that I ought to

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2003-05-08 02:40 PM

wow, that amazed me but at the same time confused me. I don't quite understand what the meaning is, but it was a good poem. thanks for sharing.

-Erica-

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

2 posted 2003-05-08 04:06 PM

oh my gosh, i really like that a lot... i can relate to it SO much... maybe you meant it in a different way that i caught it... but for me... just the words... anyways, i don't know how to put it, but awesome job... keep writing

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-05-10 12:20 PM

I know EXACTLY what you mean! You said it all!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-05-10 12:57 PM

Yeah I know exactly what you mean. No matter how much I get done, in writing and everything else, I always feel as though theres more I should do. Good write.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (05-10-2003 12:58 AM).]

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