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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-05-08 06:48 AM

Crying out..
But no one hears..
Watch the tears fall..
and forget what I've said..
'Cause nothing matters..
to me anymore..
But I'll just keep
it all in my head..
There's hardly..
anything left of me..
'Cause no one seems...
to care anymore..

No one seems to care...anymore..

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-05-08 09:57 AM

This was short, sweet, and to the point. I like although it's very sad. Loves! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-05-08 10:04 AM

I relate.........it was good.

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

3 posted 2003-05-08 03:55 PM

that was good ... i just hope everyone always keeps in mind that there is some body that does care very much...

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

4 posted 2003-05-08 08:42 PM

You gotta hang on. There's always a sun after the storm.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

5 posted 2003-05-10 12:19 PM

I agree with 'FlyingCloud.' But really nice job. I enjoyed this...and I also relate. Sometimes you just feel like no one understands nor cares what you think or feel...but someone always does. I love you, Staci!!!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

6 posted 2003-05-10 01:55 AM

*sigh* I can relate to this one too well right now

,
as always exellent job, beautiful poem.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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