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sing'n fool
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0 posted 2003-05-06 03:59 PM


The Road to Happiness

The road to happiness is long
and no one road is the right path.
Every day with every decision we make
our road changes.

Some roads just
seem to have no end,
and others are just a dead end.

Sometimes it seems
we get off the beaten path
and now must carve our own way.

Who's to say wich road is right or wrong?
If we take the road more traveled,
are we still making our own way?

If your content with the easy road,
then is it really your road to happiness???

That is something only you can decide!

M.P.D

Be yourself.  Say what you feel.  Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

© Copyright 2003 michael - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-06 04:14 PM


awesome mike! i like this one a lot. the message in it was a good one.
robin

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blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
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an akward state of mind
2 posted 2003-05-06 07:59 PM


I agree... nice idea... good poem... i'd suggest do not put the three question marks (???) after that line... Maybe it's just me but somehow even though it is a strong question, I believe it takes away from something.
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