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sykopathicfreek
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since 2003-04-22
Posts 24
ohio, usa

0 posted 2003-05-06 08:42 AM


What is death?
Is it actually knowing that you are dead,
or is it the dying of the body?
maybe it is losing your soul.

What is hell?
Is it all of ones nightmares combined,
or is it like everyone says it is.
Fire and eternal pain.

What is life?
Is it the ability to live, think and breath,
or is it a physical ability?
maybe it is loving or being loved.

What is heaven?
Is it everything you've ever dreamed of,
or is it like everyone says?
Clouds and golden gates.

Who goes to hell?
Is it those who kill,
or is it them who dont believe.
maybe everyone goes to hell.

Who goes to heaven?
Is it just those who live by the book,
or is it those who just live a joyus life?
maybe no one goes to heaven.

"Pain is but weakness leaving the body"

© Copyright 2003 Josh Robinson - All Rights Reserved
Barbara
Junior Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 32

1 posted 2003-05-06 10:57 AM


I really like your poem. I ask mysef this questions almost everyday but there are so may answers...

Its something to think about...

teenpoet
Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
2 posted 2003-05-06 11:06 AM


I liked this, and I ask the same question.  There are really no answers until you die but then again are there really any answers then?
blackandwhitehorizon
Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind
3 posted 2003-05-06 03:14 PM


That is a really good poem. I like it a lot. I, being a not deeply religous person, think about those things often. And you have put them into good words. They are strange questions to ponder that no one knows the answer to.
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