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Falling

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Paragon
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since 02-16-2003
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0 posted 05-05-2003 06:52 PM       View Profile for Paragon   Email Paragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paragon

Is it visible in my eyes?
Can you hear it in my voice?
Can you see it in my walk?

I am falling...

deeper
  deeper
    deeper

with every smile
you pull me under
and gracefully I

s
  i
    n
      k

your melodic voice
calls me onward
into the unknown


I gaze into your eyes
as they slowly ((encompass)) me
in their chocolate depths

I am  sl o w l y  falling
peacefully drifting
to you and all that you are.
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FlyingCloud
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since 04-28-2003
Posts 154
A little place inside my head


1 posted 05-05-2003 07:03 PM       View Profile for FlyingCloud   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FlyingCloud

Bravo!

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

SilentTears
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since 02-15-2003
Posts 373
Lost and Broken


2 posted 05-05-2003 08:59 PM       View Profile for SilentTears   Email SilentTears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentTears

This is a very interesting poem. The style was very unique. I like it, though. Nice job. It's refreshing to read something that doesn't make you want to cry. LoL. Nice job, anyway.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

BrokenDreams
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since 02-09-2003
Posts 432
In The Clouds


3 posted 05-05-2003 11:53 PM       View Profile for BrokenDreams   Email BrokenDreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrokenDreams

Very, very good indeed.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

blueyedlioness
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since 04-24-2003
Posts 293
USA


4 posted 05-06-2003 01:54 PM       View Profile for blueyedlioness   Email blueyedlioness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueyedlioness

*applause*

Wonderful.
blackandwhitehorizon
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since 05-05-2003
Posts 182
an akward state of mind


5 posted 05-07-2003 03:30 PM       View Profile for blackandwhitehorizon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blackandwhitehorizon

good
WinterWren
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...Coming to


6 posted 05-07-2003 05:34 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

Very different poem, I like it alot!
The imagery is excellent.
Well done!!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

WinterWren
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7 posted 05-07-2003 05:35 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

sorry, had to come back and add it to my library.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

WinterWren
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8 posted 05-07-2003 05:36 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

sorry, had to come back and add it to my library.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

GothicCherry
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TN


9 posted 09-24-2008 02:56 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Truly Beautiful.
 
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