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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419


0 posted 2003-05-04 06:07 PM


"Somewhere Down The Road Someday"
(04/05/03)

You've lite up my life with your music
I can only hope and pray
That I can do the same for someone
Somewhere down the road someday
Someday,
Someday,
Oh, Somewhere down the road someday...
Your voice are walking advertisment
For the person I have become
Can't see your well ever running dry
You'll live until music gets hung
Filled this box to the edge with hope
You gave me a map and a road
Faith to find my way...
Faith to find my way back home to town
And become civilized again
Feel the pale streetlights upon my face
And the strength of paper and pen
I wrote the bridge surviving takes
Because I'm owning my mistakes
For you taught me well...
For you taught me well through your music
And messages straight from your heart
I'm passed the tombstones stretching shadows
Upon a hill side comes the dark
Cause I found the switch on the wall
Found out help is a strong mans call
Not a weak mans voice
Not a weak mans voice...
You light up my life with your music
I can only hope and pray
That I can do the same for someone
Somewhere down the road someday
Someday,
Someday,
Oh, Somewhere down the road someday...

© Copyright 2003 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind
1 posted 2003-05-05 04:52 PM


That is a very well-written poem.
FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
2 posted 2003-05-05 06:01 PM


Someday: A word that means we have something to look forward to. Truely a great write.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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