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mindy
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since 2002-12-18
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0 posted 2003-05-04 06:04 PM


Underneath this dying star...
I've thought about life and how it's been thus far...
I can't believe I've been so nieve...
The darkness around you, I couldn't conceive...
I thought you were my angel, my one true love...
But I see it at a different angle, it fits like a glove...
All those times that you lied and I believed you...
All those times I cried, thinking I needed you...
They were all just illusions to me then...
Now there's no confusion, I won't come back again...
Thankful to finally know what I need in my life...
No need to have so much drama, no need to fight...
I recognize now...all my true friends...
Thankful that they stuck with me...til the end...
Glad to have a warm and gentle man to hold me tight..
That overwhelming feeling fits just right...
So now I ask myself..."How has life been thus far?"
Then my eyes slowly glide back to the stars...
Like the stars, my past is far away...
And in my heart...a lesson shall stay...




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LegalSecret69
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since 2003-06-04
Posts 69
Virginia
1 posted 2003-06-07 10:12 AM


wow...this is a very deep poem. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work, I'll be looking for more. You have a talent...keep posting!  "Secret"
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