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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-05-02 10:11 PM


Tell me a story,
tell me what its like to love,
to sink beneathe the layers of blue warmth,
to know,
that night will never come masked in loneliness.
Morning will never be a strange phenomenum...
not with love on your side.
not with your skin brushing mine..
Tell me a story,
read to me the words through your sweet silence,
your eyes are my source to understanding.
And we'll speak in hushed voices of a love we've never known until today,
too afraid that if we yell it out, it will just slink away.
So please, come forth, and tell me something..
Because your kiss, your eyes, these words, unfold my deepest secrets..

© Copyright 2003 Alexis Smith - All Rights Reserved
Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
1 posted 2003-05-03 07:27 PM


sad, but not so sad...I really liked the feeling of it...nice work...got my vote

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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