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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2003-04-29 09:25 PM




Don't remember much
I don't know anything anymore
I don't know what happened that night
I remember the pain
(I didn't want that)
I can still feel
(your revolting hands)
I barely remember your face
your voice lingers in my mind
didn't really know you
I would love to hate you
I can't, all that drug...
look where it led me
what happened?
only the doctor and I know
I can't even remember
nothing can be done
it was my fault
if only I hadn't been so naive...
so young...so trusting...


Regina 2003


"Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage, Then someone will say what is lost can never be saved"
-Smashing Pumpkins

[This message has been edited by Ina (04-29-2003 09:30 PM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-30 12:39 PM


No one has the right to take away your 'innocence' Regina. Date/drug rape and assault is a crime. I'm sorry if you had to experience this first hand. I do understand, too well, what you mean in this poem.
Healing thoughts, be strong...you did nothing wrong.

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
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Morris, Ill. U.S.A
2 posted 2003-04-30 02:07 PM


it's a horrible thing that your purity was so wrongfuly lost...I sincerely hope that remaining pain dissapates someday and leaves an openingfor someone good in your heart.  You did a great job of explaining your innermost pain here...really good.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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