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sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
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Morris, Il

0 posted 2003-04-29 02:46 AM




I put this up for consideration in the next book...please tell me what you think.
this is for my friend Jeremy...

My Best Friend

You are my brother...my equil.
You are my friend above
and beyond the call of duty.

You talk to me...understand me
I always feel you can relate.

As my best friend you watch over me
and entertain me.
You make me laugh when I need to
and cry when I have to.

You seem to be there...
even when I shut the world out...
you always seem to find me.

You will always have a special place in my heart.
No one could ever come between us,
break the bond we share
or tear us apart.

We have had our share of ups
and downs.
Our share of lost loves
and broken heart.

We've shared special times
and shared secrets only the two of us know.
Shared our hopes and dreams.
We've even laughed and cried together...

No one could ask for a better friend than you!
You've always stood beside me
and for you I'll always too...

M.P.D




[This message has been edited by sing'n fool (04-30-2003 12:35 AM).]

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punkrockerrobin
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1 posted 2003-04-29 03:19 AM


right on! good peom friends like that are priceless!! i just met you and jeremy but ya both are good people! it's good to know how much friends really are to people.
robin

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Eminem wanna be
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since 2003-02-04
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Windsor, Missouri
2 posted 2003-04-29 04:35 PM


hey i really like your stuff....good one too...


FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
3 posted 2003-04-29 06:25 PM


A good friend is hard to come by, but a BEST friend is one in a million!

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
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Morris, Ill. U.S.A
4 posted 2003-04-29 06:54 PM


I really touched man....yer the first dude to write something that awesome about me...it's of the nicest things anyonw have period and I think it's great...you know it all goes the same for you.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
Posts 82
Morris, Il
5 posted 2003-04-30 12:46 PM


Thank you all for you kind words.  Jeremy is my best friend in the world, and I can always depend on him.  I'm lucky to have such a good friend.  I hope you all have someone like that!

Sing'n Fool

Be yourself.  Say what you feel.  Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

Mon Cherie
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6 posted 2003-05-02 08:28 AM


It is always wonderful to have such a great buddy by your side to stick with you through thick and thin. Very well-expressed.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
7 posted 2003-05-02 12:11 PM


awww....this is really good. *tears* good write. I'm glad you have someone like that. I wouldn't be alive today if it weren't for my best friend. Thanks for the read.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

wings of the moon
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land
8 posted 2003-05-02 01:14 PM


awwwwwwwww....
this is a cutie....
well done, this is beautiful!

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