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Teen Poetry #6

What Breeze May Come

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2003-04-28 04:12 AM

What Breeze May Come

Slow breeze with soothing chills;
breaking the heat of hate.
Whispering softly in your ear
tales of love and fate.
These tales take the mind away
from lifes reality.
If fate is love and love is fate,
I pray that breeze flows free.

Harsh winds of change then rise.
They swirl about in storms.
Tearing gaps in all that's known-
leaving loss and mourn.
As daybreak arrives, we mourn the things
that change hath made undone.
If this is but the fate for me,
I damn what breeze may come!

Jeremy D. Halstead8-17-00

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2003-04-28 04:20 AM

wow you have a way with words. you know how to piee them together so wonderfully. your poems have such a beautiful style. no matter what the message you have a good talent. keep it up hun!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-04-28 11:40 AM

Mmm... yes... I like that. It's very thoughtful and quiet.

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

3 posted 2003-04-28 06:18 PM

Hmmmm...I really think that, in some ways, change is necessary in order to shape us as people. But I digress. Your poem was well thought out.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
Unknown

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2003-04-28 11:51 PM

Beautiful...
~Live and Laugh~

Always strive for excellence never perfection.
~Bella~

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

5 posted 2003-04-29 04:32 PM

Hey Jeremy....of course another enriching poem....heh you never seem to fail

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