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Lindsay
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since 2003-03-26
Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2003-04-27 10:04 PM



What if things were different?
What if we never met?
What if we never went out?
What if I never fell in love with you?
What if you never hurt me the way you did?
Would things be different?
Would anything change?
Would I still feel like this?
Would I still feel lost and alone?
What if...........

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-04-27 10:40 PM


it sure is weird to think of how your life would be with out crtin people in it, if certain things wouldn't have happened..very thought provoking piece.
~Lexy

sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
Posts 82
Morris, Il
2 posted 2003-04-27 11:22 PM


one can never be sure about anything that's why there is alway a risk.  Sometimes you just have to follow your heart.  Cause what if you never took a chance?  Good job. Keep up the good work.

Sing'n Fool

Be yourself.  Say what you feel.  Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

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