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Life as We Know It
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Life as We Know It |
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mindy Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 34VA, US |
Living life in this darkness of war... No room to cry or let our hearts soar... We can't complain of what we don't have... Can't act like the little things make us sad... All we can do is try to find the light... Find the reason and encouragement to fight... A clear vision to explain this hatred... There's no end to those we thought were sacred... Life as we know it will always be... Controlled by soldiers...like you and me. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I like the subtle analogy between the soldiers we are in the battle that is life and real battle...interesting way to depict the big picture... Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
very well written mindizzle.....it was pretty good, Travis liked this one -Stinky Twinkie- |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
This was interesting... Not sure that I completely understand it or agree with it, but it was still good. Thanks for posting. - Cody - |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
I particulary enjoyed reading this poem...good job. "Secret" |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
I really liked this poem-i feel the same way |
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