Daddy's Little Girl (2000 posts!!!)

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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2003-04-26 07:53 PM

I remember the days you use to call me
"daddy's little girl"
those days are over now
you can't get them back

no matter what i did
bad or good
i was always
"daddy's little girl"

i'm not little anymore
and you're not around
so no longer am i
"daddy's little girl"

those days have come and gone
just like you,
you came and went

no longer are we related
you said it yourself
that 18th year

so no longer do i hear
the phrase that sounded so great
i feel no love
i only feel hate

all because of the one phrase
that you used so much
"daddy's little girl"

i have grown now
as you can see
i went through life
11 years without you

no longer am i
"daddy's little girl"
yes that's right
no longer "daddy's little girl"

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-04-26 10:27 PM

Very sad, touching poem.
Well written, I like it.
Congrats on the posts!!!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

2 posted 2003-04-27 05:20 AM

I too, know of feelings such as this. Although, I think...that no matter how old you get, you're NEVER gonna grow out of beinf "Daddy's little girl"

The world is good, and nothing bad ever happens!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2003-04-27 09:30 PM

Wow, I dont' think I've read this one before hon. I really really like it, that's for sure. I love the way you ended it with the repeat

Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness

sing'n fool
Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 82
Morris, Il

4 posted 2003-04-28 03:02 AM

great job on this poem... it's sad though to think that your father could just shut you out like that. You still have lol, and you will never be cast out here in Pip. Keep up the good writing!! lol

Sing'n Fool

Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

5 posted 2003-04-28 03:07 AM

HAHA ME A CAST OUT IN PIP NEVER!!! muwhahahaha yall can't survive without me lol! yea he shut me out (disowned really) on my 18th b-day 3 years ago lol yes i'm almost 21 weeeeeeeeeeee!!! VEGAS BABY!
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

6 posted 2003-05-05 06:06 PM

I loved this. Unfortunately my own father passed away when I was younger, and this made me think of him. Thanks.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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