Clark (I'll Never Be A Cartoon)

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Teen Poetry #6

Clark (I'll Never Be A Cartoon)

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2003-04-26 06:19 PM

"Clark (I'll Never Be A Cartoon)"
(27/04/03)
© 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

He picks up a cartoon comic
The man with the iron stomack, and says:
"Clark, how do you joggle things so well?
Look at me I am just one man
And I'm not clear on where I stand, somedays
I wish you could only show and tell."

Cause Clark You're A Cartoon And You Will Never Age.
Pocess Power And Strenght To Manage Every Page.
Your Life's All About The Toppings And The Glase.
But Clark I'm Not You, And I'll Never Be A Cartoon...

"I must be crazy and boring,
To seek advice from a drawing", he says
"But friends are so hard to find these days
You come to visit my prison,
And always have time to listen, sort of
The one soul I haven't chased away."

Cause Clark You're A Cartoon And You Will Never Age.
Pocess Power And Strenght To Manage Every Page.
Your Life's All About The Toppings And The Glase.
But Clark I'm Not You, And I'll Never Be A Cartoon...

I know I have to fight my battles here
May take broken hearts and lots of tears
But I know I can win

But Clark You're A Cartoon And You Will Never Age.
Pocess Power And Strenght To Manage Every Page.
Your Life's All About The Toppings And The Glase.
But Clark I'm Not You,
And Never Ever Intent To Be A Cartoon...

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2003-04-29 08:04 PM

I liked this, you might want to check the spelling on a few things, but besides that it was good. good job and keep it up!

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2003-04-29 09:28 PM

I like this. it was good. i like the use of comics in it.

Regina

"Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage, Then someone will say what is lost can never be saved"
-Smashing Pumpkins

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

3 posted 2003-04-30 03:40 PM

This would make a good song... nice job. And yeah, check the spelling.

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