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my life |
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newguy04 Junior Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 17ohio |
Life is slipping away out of my fingers. More and more every day. I dont know whats going on, Too many problems, and too much sorrow Slipping, slippin, slipping My life is almost gone This one is really short. I was watching tv and i thought about it. Next poems are gonna be more happy becasue im talking about my anger -unknown- (me) |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
This was good. Hope things turn out better for you soon. They will trust me. Don't get caught up on the details. They'll just slow you down. ex animo, Aaron IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
yer young...if you think life's crappy now, you've got a long way to go...life's slipping into it's next stage, that's all. but I get yer jist...nice job. sing'n fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Good Poem, I liked it!  Love, |
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