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Eminem wanna be
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since 2003-02-04
Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

0 posted 2003-04-24 05:03 PM



My best friend is a little black mutt
who romps and plays all day
her batteries never seem to run down
and she's special in her own way

I got her as an abandoned stray
about two years ago
i can tell her my deepest secrets
and she won't let anyone know

she sometimes sleeps indoors
with me on my bed
she's hogs the blankets
and steps all over my head

shes friends with a horse
and another dog named scooby doo
she loves to chase squirrels
and rabbits WOOO WHOOO!

My best friend is a little black mutt
who romps and plays all day
her batteries never seem to run down
and she's special in her own way
lol this is kinda stupid but i was in a happy mood today and decided to write it in school

[This message has been edited by Eminem wanna be (04-24-2003 05:04 PM).]

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sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
Posts 82
Morris, Il
1 posted 2003-04-25 03:15 AM




I don't think that it's a stupid poem.  I think that it's great that you really care for your pet.   Sometimes a pet is the most important part of a family.  Good to see that the simple things in life can give you such joy.  Good write.

Mike(Sing'n Fool)

Be yourself.  Say what you feel.  Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

Jeremy Halstead
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2 posted 2003-04-26 09:46 PM


not just anyone can write so indepth about their pet...good stuff.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

WinterWren
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3 posted 2003-04-27 12:22 PM


Nothing involving dogs is stupid!!
I really like this one, you showed us her personality very well.
Dogs are wonderful aren't they?

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Eminem wanna be
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since 2003-02-04
Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri
4 posted 2003-04-28 04:34 PM


Yeah dogs are wonderful....cats are ok but dogs just have that person like personality sometimes when your sad i guess....at least mine does
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