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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
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0 posted 2003-04-24 01:14 PM


Trees sway gently
While hearts are broken
Birds sing sweetly
While tears fall slowly

Babies are born
While grandparents die
Young love blossoms
While true love does reign

Rain falls quickly
While smiles brighten homes
Storms rage outside
While warmth spreads inside

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-04-24 09:56 PM


I liked this! Short, sweet, and to the point. Poems don't have to be long to be good. Great write! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
2 posted 2003-04-28 01:30 AM


it's there truly a method to all of the madness...A fire burns within my soul while a fireman is crying. My baby born to find this earth while grandfather is slowly dying.
loved the poem...good thought.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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