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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il 
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Blank Canvas Who are you to judge?! Where does this misperception come from? You are unable to determine for yourself, so you go by the ill advised misperseption of others. We have never met, never had a conversation. I should be that of a blank canvas, but your picture is already predetermined! Now you sit and talk mindless nothings about me. In your own narrow mind, I'm an outcast... unfit for your world. That's ok though... Your world is just a bitter, shallow, pitiful excuse of an exsistance. A world fit for only you. My world is that of hope, love, understanding, and above all...acceptance where all are welcome, and none are judged! M.P.D Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
There are plenty of heartless people out there today..you made a good statement. I like this! ~Jess  "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Wonderful meaning expressed here. I really like your writing style. The poem was well written, you sounded rightously angry but not so much that you were upset if that makes any sense at all!! Anyways Enjoyable read. ~Live and Laugh~ Always strive for excellence never perfection. |
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sykopathicfreek Junior Member
since 2003-04-22
Posts 24ohio, usa |
I feel this poem was about my friends and i because its just so right. Good one. I would like to read more like this, on acceptance. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
glad I could be a part of your creative growth, this is a perfect example of your improvement...keep it up...you da man. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
"That's ok though... Your world is just a bitter, shallow, pitiful excuse of an exsistance. A world fit for only you." So true, some people are just so self-centered. And they don't even know it. This is very good. Keep it up. ex animo, Aaron Woodside IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
Thank you all for your responses. I enjoy reading what everyone has to say, and I just hope that I can keep improving with your feedback. lol Sing'n Fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
you rawk my sawks! that poem was just amazing man to think there are still guys in this world that actually don't prejudge or predertemine what the other persone is going to be like and all that. they saw a first impression is what sticks heck i give a person a whole day so i can GET TO KNOW THEM!! those are some keywords weeeeeeeee *high fives mike* you rawk! robin i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave! |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
 Your poem struck a chord with me. I try not to judge people, but yet, I find those around me, judging me.^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
This I can really relate too, especially lately. I really liked the thirs stanza. Its good to know theres decent ppl. in thw world still.  |
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