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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-04-22 07:39 PM

This one has been lingering in the back of my binder for a while so I decided to finally type it up today. Let me know what you think!

HAVE YOU?

Have you seen me?
A lot has changed
Since then…
I’m hiding from the world

Have you heard me?
I don’t keep to myself
Not anymore
I want them all to know

Have you thought of me?
I still think of you time
And time again
Some things will never change

Do you really care?
I’m not the guy you used
To know
I’ve changed the world around

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2003-04-27 02:41 AM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so beautiful!!!! cody dear i loved it! big hugs!!!!
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

Guardurthoughts
Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

2 posted 2003-04-27 03:36 AM

To change the world around ones self is a tedious task and does not always result with the trust you lost. It was simple and straight foward, I thank you because in all its simplicity it touched me and pulled the strings of my memorys. Wonderful!

`Erica

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

sing'n fool
Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 82
Morris, Il

3 posted 2003-04-27 05:02 PM

All one can ever do is grow and change. Sometimes we change without even trying, and it takes another to point this out. The people that can change for themselves are a true inspiration to us all...good write.

Sing'n fool

Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

4 posted 2003-04-27 05:09 PM

I really liked that. The last stanza was broken up kinda weird, but it didn't distract me too much.

Nice work.

~cassi

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