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Lindsay
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since 2003-03-26
Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2003-04-21 09:38 PM



walking around in a daze
this all seems like a dream
no, not a dream
more like a nightmare
one of those scary ones, where you wake up in a cold sweat
except, i'm not waking up
this is my reality
my cold, harsh reality
can't ecscape it, but i'm trying to change it
tired of living like this
all i want is to be happy

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sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
Posts 82
Morris, Il
1 posted 2003-04-22 02:22 AM





good poem.  I think that we all just want to be happy, but the sad fact is that it just don't happen every day.  Some days we're up, and some we're down.  I do like your poem.  Good job!

Sing'n fool

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