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Time Has No Essence
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Time Has No Essence |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
As I sit alone, Once again, Life is passing me by... Ever so quickly, One door closes and another opens, Nothing new, Same old thing, Oppurtunity after oppurtunity, Slipping me by, Unable to grasp the concept, Now the sun is down, Once again, Life is passing me by... "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
"Once again, Life is passing me by..." OOO! I really like this one, homie! Nice job, nice job. I can't believe you wrote this in like 3 mintues! Very good work. Your word usage was perfect! Love, absolutely love! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
I agree with Silent Tears, Great, I mean GREAT job on this! I love that last line too! |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
you know i can relate to this one. I feel that life to often passes me by. A door opens, but then it just slams in my face. This is a good write! Good expression. Keep on writing. Please feel free to check out some of my works, and give me advice. Sing'n fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
i really like the concept of this... and nicely written as well... good job  "Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives" |
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