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Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

0 posted 2003-04-21 04:47 PM

Sitting alone
Crying my tears
Never having a friend to talk to on the phone
My dad downstairs drinking his beers
For I have many fears
While I'm alone, I cry out these tears
They hurt me, They go streaming down my face
If only I could get away from this place
Then the tears would come no more
For my heart is sore
I love my family, I truely do
But just between me and you
Nothing you say
Will make my tears go away
Go ahead and try
These tears will come 'til the day I die.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-04-21 06:16 PM

Good good good! hehe..loved it! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-04-21 06:26 PM

Good job! Very nice write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Android 18
Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 61
Austrailia (My DreamLand)

3 posted 2003-04-22 08:40 PM

Very nicely done... I enjoyed it

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

4 posted 2003-04-23 11:34 AM

tears are the only physical form that our souls may take...let them fall...keep your spirits up and you take care of you...good job, I really felt ya.

J.D.H.

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

5 posted 2003-04-23 04:37 PM

I know what you mean. I felt the emotion put into this...I cry a silent cry that no one sees..Only me. I liked your poem, though. It was great. Talk to you soon. Peace! ~*~Kirah~*~

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

6 posted 2003-04-25 01:17 AM

Nice write. Hope to see more.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

7 posted 2003-05-02 08:25 AM

You have expressed it very well.

I hope that life would be bright and sunny for a sensible person like yourself. Once the tears have fallen, forget about the event that has caused it to fall. Then pick yourself up, and put your next best foot forward. It's a brand new day, and new experiences and opportunities still awaits.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

8 posted 2003-05-02 12:12 PM

well theres my life in a nutshell...hope it gets better for you.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

9 posted 2003-06-22 12:28 PM

I really love your writing. Keep it up.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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