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Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2003-04-20 07:12 PM



Musical Bodies

Caressing softly along your thighs,
while staring deeply into your eyes.
Perfect like porcelain, your body in motion
inside my arms with undying devotion.
The lips I kiss upon your face
are full and dazzling in sweet embrace.
Your fingertips sweeping beside my ear;
I hear their magic enchantingly clear.
Entire bodies, our bodies in whole-
sinking together in one combined soul.
Completing our needs in extacy's fashion
with musically perfect movements of passion.
Completing the needs of our hearts and our minds
with pleasure and emotion genuinly combined.

J.D.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.


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Trouble Breathing
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since 2002-11-12
Posts 63

1 posted 2003-04-20 09:25 PM


Wow.

Just..Wow.

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2003-04-20 09:28 PM


Very descriptive, I like it. Good job! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

3 posted 2003-04-20 11:51 PM


my God I love this
Bel

sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
Posts 82
Morris, Il
4 posted 2003-04-22 03:45 AM


beautiful poem!  This is one of your best works.  Full of feeling, and emotion.  I think the ladies should like this one.  Good job buddy!

Sing'n Fool

Be yourself.  Say what you feel.  Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

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